Yes today, we are going to discuss about this module because most of the student face this module is one of the toughest module in IELTS. First of all, you have to focus on writing module. As you need to know the format to write task-2 in appropriate method. There are main three things you need to remember in your mind is it has introduction, body paragraph-1, body paragraph-2 and conclusion. Firstly , we will discuss the scientific method to write introduction, in the beginning of introduction there is a hook-up line, background statement and thesis statement.
In the hook-up line: you have to start your essay with punch line for instance: if your are writing your essay on the topic of education the write a hook-up line like (Education is the third-eye of human being or Education is a companion which no future can depress, no crime can destroy, no enemy can alienate and no nepotism can enslave) like these type of lines called hook-up lines. Moving further, background statement is called re-phrasing. Nextly, you should know how to do re-phrasing of sentences. Initially, underline the main words in your question statement and re-phrase the word and make the sentences then, thesis statement is that in the end of the question that helps to control the ideas in the paper what we have to write in our essay for an example: to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement, problem solution, give your option so on.
It is generally believed that education is of vital Importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions?
It is irrefutable that education is of crucial significance to the progress of people and societies It has been well said that – Education is a companion which, no future can depress, no crime can destroy, no enemy can alienate and no nepotism can enslave. In the following paragraphs I shall discuss how education can benefit individuals and societies
First of all, education should impart professional knowledge. Such knowledge enables Individuals to earn a livelihood in this way they are benefited themselves and also they can look after their families better. This leads to better societies because an educated society is a crime free society. People are self-sufficient and so do not need to go on the path of crime. I addition, Physical education should also be provided by a well-rounded education. It is a well known fact that healthy individuals would make a healthy society. Good health is a basic human need and for the holistic development of individuals, physical education should be incorporated in school curricula.
Moving Further, Education should also teach moral values. This makes us adaptive to society. There is less violence and less crime in society is there if people are educated. They become more open minded and live in harmony with each other. Moral science should be a compulsory subject till high school level. Finally, today environmental education is the need of the hour. All schools should have mandatory lessons on saving the environment. Small steps can go a long way in saving energy. Energy saved is energy generated. We all have to do away with some luxuries if we want a better tomorrow.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that education should have professional, physical, moral and environmental education. After all, ‘Education is not the filling up of a pail but the lighting up of a fire’. A well-rounded education consisting of all the above components would benefit both the individual and the society.
Follow this planning:
Body Paragraph 1: Academic education – Jobs – vocational education and Physical education – healthy individuals – healthy society
Body Paragraph 2: Moral education and Environmental education
Conclusion: reiterate opinion